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Post  Toxic on Tue Nov 02, 2010 1:39 pm

XIX aka Sun is my main Fc please don't steal him and critic plz

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Re: Project XIX

Post  TheCreatorExe on Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:29 pm

C+C
-His arms are akwardly positioned
-Right hand looks blocky
-His shoes are all outined with black...no.
-His headphones are too high and should wrap aroung horizantally due to the shape of his head
-Needs contrast on the color of his shoes

But not bad for a WIP! Takes these problems and fix them then youll have a really decent character! Work on it man, don't give up Smile
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Re: Project XIX

Post  Toxic on Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:46 pm

TheCreatorExe wrote:C+C
-His arms are akwardly positioned
-Right hand looks blocky
-His shoes are all outined with black...no.
-His headphones are too high and should wrap aroung horizantally due to the shape of his head
-Needs contrast on the color of his shoes

But not bad for a WIP! Takes these problems and fix them then youll have a really decent character! Work on it man, don't give up Smile
I kinda noticed that most my friends kept telling me to fix almost the exact thing you said

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Re: Project XIX

Post  TheCreatorExe on Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:08 pm

Then i guess..i was right. Wink
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