Project XIX
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Project XIX
XIX aka Sun is my main Fc please don't steal him and critic plz
Toxic- Posts : 5
Join date : 2010-10-28
Re: Project XIX
C+C
-His arms are akwardly positioned
-Right hand looks blocky
-His shoes are all outined with black...no.
-His headphones are too high and should wrap aroung horizantally due to the shape of his head
-Needs contrast on the color of his shoes
But not bad for a WIP! Takes these problems and fix them then youll have a really decent character! Work on it man, don't give up
-His arms are akwardly positioned
-Right hand looks blocky
-His shoes are all outined with black...no.
-His headphones are too high and should wrap aroung horizantally due to the shape of his head
-Needs contrast on the color of his shoes
But not bad for a WIP! Takes these problems and fix them then youll have a really decent character! Work on it man, don't give up
TheCreatorExe- Admin
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Join date : 2010-10-28
Re: Project XIX
I kinda noticed that most my friends kept telling me to fix almost the exact thing you saidTheCreatorExe wrote:C+C
-His arms are akwardly positioned
-Right hand looks blocky
-His shoes are all outined with black...no.
-His headphones are too high and should wrap aroung horizantally due to the shape of his head
-Needs contrast on the color of his shoes
But not bad for a WIP! Takes these problems and fix them then youll have a really decent character! Work on it man, don't give up
Toxic- Posts : 5
Join date : 2010-10-28
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